Wednesday, July 23, 2008

07/23/08 12:25PM PST


stanzas 3, 5, 9, 10, 14 are broken

you're broken
or i'll break you in half
bitch
what now
that's too many fucking stanzas anyway i don't have 14 stanzas
AAAAAAAAAH
AAAAAAAAAH
BLASLBASGALSGJKSLGG

no, you have 14

SHUTTTTTTUP ZI'MGOINGTOFUCKINGKILLYOUJUSTKIDDINGBUTSERIOUSLYOURGOINGTOFUCKING DIE

i thought 14 was appropriate for a soliloquy

DONTFEARTHEREAPERZYOUR
WHATS A SOLILOQUY

err, sonnet. sorry, i swapped terms accidentally.

Sonnet
Structure
* 14 lines
* Iambic Pentameter
* static rhyme scheme

shakespeare papschmear
i'm in love
shakespeare was half gay he can't feel love

hopefully she doesn't get all caught up in the bad pentameter. i know it'd kill the mood for me
i'd probably dry up like the sahara

oh i'm going to fuck you up
i'm going to walk to california tonight
and kill you

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